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The last week or so has felt a lot like life catching up to me, reminding me a little of the the free short story I’ve chosen for October – “Susan and the Gangster.”
Though of course I haven’t been caught up in any high profile cases, it’s just that a lot has happened, and I’m not ready to talk about it yet.
When I wrote this story, I was going through a kind of mystery madness. Not really able to concentrate on reading anything, so watching David Suchet’s Poirot, and Ji Chang-Wook in “Healer” at the time.
Do you find when you read or watch a lot of mystery, every spied moment could be part of a thriller hand off, or dropped clue? Or is that just me,
Anyway, I hope you enjoy it – it’s free here for the next four weeks.
And if you don’t? No worries, the next one’s not far away..
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The calm before the stormโฆ
Tasked to document every move criminal mastermind Nick Liang makes, Private Investigartor Susan Murray chooses to draw.
Part life drawing, part Method of loci memory palace, part plain old excuse.
Itโs like watching a live action Asian drama until she finds herself pulled into the case.
Cover blown. In deep water. Barely coping.
Can she rescue herself and the case?
Susan and the Gangster by Alexandria Blaelock is free on this website for a month.
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Susan stifled a yawn into her shoulder and rolled her eyes at Ryan, the colleague she was usually paired up with.
The briefing meeting was the boring as bat shit calm before the storm.
Mimma, their boss, had collected together the four teams whoโd be primarily responsible for surveillance of Nick Liang.
Sheโd been talking for an hour already, with the accompanying slide presentation detailing the information the background team had collected, and what the executive committee hoped they could achieve with additional surveillance.
โOur client has alleged Liang is the head of the criminal organisation who killed her son himself. Your job is to document every place he goes and every person he sees.โ
โIsnโt that a job for the Police?โ Ryan asked.
โOur client has not received satisfaction from the Police, and has engaged us to collect the necessary evidence.
โAny further questions?
โThen you have the weekend to yourselves and will commence this operation at 00:00 midnight Monday morning. It will run for one week, ending at 23:59 Sunday night.
โYou are dismissed,โ she said and exited the meeting.
Susan stretched as she allowed the other attendees to leave the room. Why sheโd ever thought working for the Wilkinson National Detective Agency (est. 1889), would be glamorous was beyond her.
The Collins Street offices were pretty nice, but she was rarely in them. More often than not she was outdoors, watching, trying not to be seen by others.
At least it was Summer, and it would be warm outside.
ยซยซ โข ยปยป
Susan stretched, closed her eyes, and turned to the sun hoping for a little extra oomph to recharge.
Not that there was much in the way of direct sun in the Bourke Street mall during the afternoon, but the rays reflecting from the shop windows would have to do.
According to her watch, there was a little over an hour until she clocked off, and if she was honest, she was exhausted.
Could not wait to hand over, and go home to a hot, spring blossom scented bath in her tiny bath, a glass of wine, and a Chinese take-out.
Quite possibly all at the same time while she listened to some smooth jazz, Norah Jones perhaps.
Not that her job was difficult per se, but following someone around, trying not to be conspicuous was quite tiring.
Which was why she always went nondescript for work; beige sundress, natural sandals, tortoiseshell sunglasses (not too big or small), no make-up, mouse-brown hair loosely tied in a ponytail at the back of her neck.
Absolutely nothing that might distinguish her during a casual scan of the crowd.
Except, for the keenly observant, she was almost always drawing in a sketch pad; her preferred way to keep track of the locations those she was tailing visited, and the people they met there.
Part life drawing, part Method of Loci memory palace for remembering details of interactions.
When pressed, as she had been once or twice, she would contend the mark was the most โunconventionallyโ attractive person sheโd seen, and that was why sheโd been following them.
Generally, the mark would call her a freak or a stalker, and tell her to leave; not necessarily quietly or politely.
Which she did, because the Agency always had teams of at least two people tailing the subjects of its investigations for just that reason.
It was a strategy that always worked, except that day.
She dropped her arms, and rolled her head backwards and forwards on her neck to ease the tension, and as she did, someone snatched the sketchbook from her lap.
She stood up, her eyes flicking open, ready to attack (in the nicest, most nondescript way) the person whoโd taken the book.
Except.
It was the guy hanging out with the target.
Sheโd been made!
For a moment she was frozen, and it was just enough time for him to dance away, over the tram tracks with the book, flicking rapidly through the pages.
โI think she likes you,โ he called out to Nick, who looked amused because of course, everyone liked him.
And why wouldnโt you when he wore a tight black t-shirt with black jeans and short black boots? When his shoulder-length dark hair shone with good health, and probably a lot of product too.
To go with the occasional glimpses of the silver stud in his ear and the heavy Bali silver chain he wore around his neck.
Following him around had been like watching an Asian drama live and in person. Everywhere he went, from cafรฉ to market to supermarket people stopped to talk to him, and sometimes asked to have their photo taken with him.
If she didnโt know better, sheโd think he was an actor or something, knee-deep in admirers.
And that stupid guy was always with him. Though sheโd only drawn one picture of him because he wasnโt the target, and in about a millisecond that was going to get really embarrassing.
How the hell was she going to get out of this?
She couldnโt leave the book with them; she hadnโt remembered where heโd been, or who heโd been with. She hadnโt needed to; it was all sketched out and she didnโt need to remember it.
Not that the book identified her as a licensed private investigator, though she was required to carry her license when she was on the job.
But it did have her name, mobile phone number, and the post office box address of the Agency.
โHey, these are pretty good,โ the guy said, showing them to Nick.
Oh my god, it just got worse and worse. This was going to be her off the case.
โWell, Susan Murray,โ said Nick, โcan I buy you a drink?โ as he started walking towards her.
Goddammit, she thought.
โOh! No. I wouldnโt dream ofโฆโ
Gak, try again, โIโm really notโฆโ
Fuckโs sake. โJust give me the book and Iโll be on my way.โ
She took a step back as he and his cologne reached her, enveloping her in the smell of rainforest.
His hair fell down over his right eye as he smiled down at her, his warm brown eye meeting hers, looking every inch the cunning fist-fighting villain, the client suspected he was.
He smoothed a lock of hair that had escaped from her ponytail back, tucking it behind her ear.
Move, she thought-shouted at herself, donโt stand here like a rabbit stuck in the oncoming car headlights!
He held his hand out behind him, and the other guy dropped the sketchbook in it, โyou can only have it back if you let me buy you a drink.โ
She looked up at Nick, unable to break his gaze, weighing up the loss of a dayโs work with forcing her feet to turn around and walk away.
Stupid, stupid, stupid, she told herself.
He waggled the book, and she looked at it, and through it to Ryan on the other side of the mall.
She made a seemingly random coded gesture to tell him her cover was blown, and he nodded.
She looked back up at Nick and said, with bad grace โfine.โ
He smiled triumphantly, and grabbing her wrist, hustled her into a tiny restaurant tucked behind what used to be the main post office on the corner and was now a shopping arcade.
He ushered her into a booth and sat beside her, way too close.
Just when she thought she was on her own with him, and could maybe manage him, his friend sat opposite.
Not that he was any comfort, having got her into this mess he was unlikely to do anything to get her out of it.
In fact, it seemed to her that they had some kind of bet riding on whether he could get her to doโฆ What?
Kiss him?
Sleep with him?
Take him back to her place?
Nick ordered wine and something to eat, not bothering to ask what she wanted.
He put the book on the table, and she made a grab for it.
โAh ah ah-aa,โ he said, โnot until you tell me why you were following us.โ
Good, she was prepared for that, โI just liked the way you moved,โ she shrugged, dipping her head as he quirked an eyebrow at his friend and slung his left arm along the back of the booth, and coincidentally around her.
Like a teenager at the movies.
She continued, โitโs all kind of sharp and angled. Like a stick insect transformed into human form.โ
He smiled a small smile, as if sheโd said something amusing, and then opened the book, carefully turning the pages, smoothing his fingers over himself on the page.
โI donโt see anything sharp or angled about these drawings, I see the grace and form of a ballet dancer.โ
A curious way to describe himself.
โBallet dancer? Really?โ she attempted to pull the book across again, but he held it steady, resting his right forearm on it.
โYou canโt fool me,โ he said, โthese pictures are not of an insect, but someone youโre teetering on the edge of falling in love with.โ
Okay, that part was true.
Sheโd been following him around for a couple of days and hadnโt seen anything that would suggest he was the kind of guy the client thought he was.
All sheโd seen, was Nick being courteous and wildly charming.
His head leaned toward her, almost touching, and spoke quietly โdid you think I wouldnโt notice a woman as beautiful as you in a crowd?โ
She lifted her head so rapidly it connected with his, his stubble grazing her temple.
Her cover had definitely been blown. Maybe as early as the first day.
And if heโd spotted her, heโd probably changed his pattern, and there wasnโt anything sheโd drawn that was compromising. Or in any way reliable.
Except perhaps his likeness.
And maybe his friendโs.
It was time to extract herself and disappear before his suspicions were roused. If they werenโt already.
And hopefully, the guys on the other shifts would get whatever evidence they needed.
Because as it turned out, she had nothing.
She stood up abruptly, โI have to go.โ
Nick leaned towards the table, blocking her path, โbut weโve only just got here.โ
โI forgot; I have somewhere I need to be.โ
โNot another man I hope? Though your sketchbook only captures me and Ares here,โ he nodded his head toward Ares, who grinned wolfishly.
And too late, she started to get worried she was in over her head. She held her handbag to her chest like a shield, looking around, trying to spot any other Wilkinson agents.
But she didnโt see anyone she knew; from the Agency or otherwise.
Had they planned this? Had they stacked the restaurant?
Or even worse, had they infiltrated the Agency?
Was it possible sheโd been placed there because someone thought sheโd be relatively easy to crack?
Or disposable?
โNo, Iโโ
As her sense of panic mounted, she realised she was hyperventilating and tried to slow her breathing.
โItโs none of your business. You can keep the sketchbook.โ
She was prepared to climb over him if she had to, but at the last moment, he subsided, dropping his arm and pushing himself back towards the seat so she could scramble past.
And she fled, running out of the restaurant, not looking back and catching the nearest tram. Fortunately going in her direction.
After a few stops, she got off that tram, and onto the next one that arrived.
And a few stops after that, changed again.
Then walked for about twenty minutes to be sure no one was following her, but also to get to a tram stop where she could catch a tram that would take her home.
Sadly, her desire to relax in a hot bath had dissipated; she felt twitchy between her shoulder blades. Though she was fairly confident no one was following her.
But, she got off the tram a few stops earlier than usual and stopped in a busy restaurant. She managed to get a partially concealed table in a corner where she had a good view of the door.
She ordered a few dishes to make it look like she was waiting for someone, and a bottle of wine. She drank a glass and nibbled at the dishes, looking around as if she was expecting someone.
Which she kind of was, but had no idea how she would know them. Except that theyโd probably take a seat facing the door like her.
About an hour and a half later sheโd drunk all the wine, eaten a significant amount of food, and felt safe enough to walk the rest of the home without looking behind her.
That didnโt stop her looking from the corner of her eyes at the streetscape reflected in the closed, darkened shops as she walked down the high street.
Gradually passing from shops and businesses to flats and houses, with less passing traffic.
Trying to move with her usual confident stride.
She hadnโt expected to be out late, and hadnโt brought a light cardigan, so she shivered a little in the cool evening air.
As she turned off the high street, she ran the last couple of blocks to her block of flats, dancing in the few seconds it took for her security code to register.
A quick glance back at the street, and she fled up the stairs, hoping no one would see which floor she lived on.
Back in her one and a half room flat, she crawled across the floor to avoid anyone seeing her from the street, and closed the curtains before she let herself relax a little.
Then she rang Wilkinsonโs and talked to the evening duty manager. She quickly outlined that her cover had been blown, and she was a little concerned Nick had the opportunity to discover who she was, where she worked, and where she lived.
โDonโt worry,โ she was told, โweโll have someone drive by your flat a couple of times during the night. Stay home tomorrow morning and wait for your duty supervisor to call you. If anything happens in the meantime, call in again.โ
She smiled to herself as she acknowledged she was probably overreacting, but she still waited for several long minutes before lighting a couple of candles rather than switching on the main overhead lights.
And tried not to worry that heโd already been through her flat, or had one of those devices that could see through walls.
She crept over to the fridge and drank some milk from the plastic bottle before crawling to the bedroom to strip her clothes off and rest.
And as she fell asleep, she wondered if sheโd been mistaken.
Was it possible, the client had some kind of grudge against Nick?
That he wasnโt a thieving gangster? That he was just misunderstood.
And then told herself to get a grip on herself.
Nick Liang might be pretty, but his reputation was ruthless.
She was pretty sure sheโd read somewhere that he beat a guy to death with his bare hands. Over a girl, or a parking spot, or something he imagined.
No matter what, she couldnโt get involved in any capacity with him because she was a private investigator who was investigating him.
It was such a massive conflict of interest it would jeopardise the veracity of her evidence and testimony.
And ruin her career as an investigator.
And with the stain of Nick Liang around her, any career she chose to take up once heโd got bored and dumped her.
Though potentially, that would give her the opportunity to try making a living from her art.
Call herself Banksia and refuse to make public appearances.
She sighed and thumped her pillows to try and make them more comfortable. Eventually, she fell asleep but slept fitfully.
The next morning, she could see the sun shining through the gaps in the curtains, in what looked to be another beautiful day.
Which was almost a shame as sheโd drunk too much the night before, and the day seemed rather brighter than normal.
She dragged on the luxurious black and gold silk robe her mother gave her last Christmas and padded to what passed as a kitchen in her bare feet to put her coffee percolator on.
Reflexively, she relaxed into her morning routine as she heard it start heating up. The smell of the fresh grounds from the jar was almost enough to keep her going until it was done.
She drank a big glass of water, cut up some sourdough and popped it in the toaster, got out some raw honey and cultured butter ready for when it popped.
On her way through to her tiny bathroom, she opened the curtains and windows.
And that was where the day started getting complicated because Nick Liang stood across the street, looking up.
She quickly took a step back away from the window, hoping he hadnโt seen her, but afraid she couldnโt be that lucky.
She rang her boss Mimma, and of course, the service diverted to the morning shift duty manager.
โUm, hi,โ she said. โItโs Susan Murray from Day Surveillance Team five. I was assigned to watch Nick Liang last week, yesterday my cover was blown, and today heโs right outside my house.โ
โI think I heard something about this in the briefing,โ she said, โplease hold on,โ and before Susan could say another word, she was listening to an electric organ version of some kind of cheerful, never-ending pop music that she hoped wasnโt the same โtuneโ the clients heard.
Her toast popped, which was a teensy bit inconvenient as she still hadnโt been to the bathroom.
She put her mobile phone on speaker on the kitchen bench, and danced a bit while she buttered the toast, and added honey, then poured herself a black coffee with one teaspoon of sugar; knocking the spoon once against the side of the jar to even it up before it went into the cup.
Not really game to leave the phone, and not sure how long until the woman came back, she took it, and her breakfast, across to her dining table to eat.
Not that it was a dining table, more of a large coffee table in front of the couch.
And when sheโd finished, continued to sit while she licked her index finger and picked the crumbs up with it.
Finally, a man picked up the call, โSusan, itโs Ben Hall here.โ
She sucked her breath in, because he was the partner she nominally worked for.
Her big, bigโฆ big boss.
โAh, hello Ben.โ
โYour, er, situationโฆ has given us what you might call a unique opportunity. If youโre willing.โ
โAn opportunity?โ
โYes. If Nick Liang is interested in you, itโs possible you may gain deeper access to his network than we currently have access to. The kind of access where we can gather more information to prove or disprove the clientโs hypothesis and get this investigation wrapped up quicker than expected.โ
โButโโ
โNow there could be some danger in this activity, and weโre prepared to make you an acting Level Four operative for the duration. How does that sound?โ
โIt sounds like a promotion, but I havenโt undertaken any specialist training that would equip me for that kind of role.โ
โYou donโt have to do anything youโre uncomfortable with, and you can quit the placement anytime.โ
The doorbell rang.
โIโve got to go Ben, someoneโs at the door.โ
She opened the door, as Ben said, โthink about it and let me know.โ
โI donโt have a choice,โ she said, โheโs right here at my door.โ
Nick cocked his head and looked pleased with himself.
โOkay then, Iโll get a panic button brooch delivered to you today.โ
โFine,โ she said and hung up.
Nick stepped over the threshold, and closed the door behind him โthatโs right, Iโm here.โ
โWhat do you want Nick?โ
He raised the sketchbook to eye level, โI brought your book back.โ
She reached for it, but he pulled it out of her reach.
โDidnโt I say you had to have a drink with me to get it back?โ he arched an eyebrow at her.
And honestly, he looked gorgeous when he did that, but she just wanted to push him back out the door again.
Maybe that was why heโd shut it.
She sighed and rubbed her forehead. It was so much easier in her beige dress, sketching him from across the street.
Next job, she was requisitioning a camera like everyone else.
โDidnโt I tell you I picked you out of a crowd because youโre so beautiful?โ
โI donโt recall you saying any such thing.โ
He reached out to lightly touch her robe, โso nice to see what youโre really like; in living colour.โ
In one smooth movement, she turned away so he missed touching her, but the robe slid down her shoulder, reminding her she was naked underneath it.
And still hadnโt visited the little girlโs room.
Which raised another issue. Her flat was a small studio apartment. More or less all that kept her living and sleeping rooms apart were a Chinese style screen and a bead curtain.
Luckily the bathroom had a door.
And enough space to hang a small load of handwashing to dry.
Unable to figure out how to get rid of him, she said โwait right here,โ and fled behind the screen.
Fortunately, in her line of work there was no room for โstage frightโ – you might lose your target – so she got the bathroom thing out of the way lickedy-split.
She paused in front of the drying rack, thinking about what heโd said about living colour, and decided that if he wanted to get to know her, he would get to know the real her.
Not her quick disappear into a crowd work persona. It was about fine for eight hours of not being noticed, but as a woman of real, black and white opinions, hard to maintain.
Well, mostly the real her.
It would be dumb to let him get to know her.
Sheโd have to lie, and maybe when he found out about that, heโd back off. Fast.
She quickly dressed in mostly dry blue jeans and a red linen tunic.
When she got back to him, he wasnโt exactly where sheโd left him, but had taken two steps to the kitchen to make coffee for two.
Leaving her sketchbook on the table.
On the one hand annoying, but on the other, she really needed another coffee.
The doorbell rang, and he said, โIโll get that,โ almost sprinting to the door to his ubiquitous friend.
โHave you met Aresio?โ Now that she looked at him, he would have seemed more attractive if he hadnโt been standing next to Nick.
Funny that she hadnโt really noticed him before; smooth blond hair, olive complexion, stunning blue eyes, with the same hidden, toned musculature. Something about him that seemed slightly menacing, now that she was giving him 100% of her focus.
But he wasnโt the target, even if he was with him 95% of the time, and it was up to the analysts back in the office to identify and categorise him.
โAres please,โ he said as he stepped into the flat, smiling at her then looking around, โnice place.โ He handed a bag of pastries that smelled divine to Nick and held out his hand.
โAres,โ she took it, and his fingers tightened around hers, though whether he was trying to warn her, or size her up, or had noticed that she was somehow different from the day before she couldnโt tell.
โAll right, Iโm out of here,โ he said, dropping her hand.
โYou arenโt staying?โ she asked.
โAnd get in the way of you two love-birds? I donโt think so.
โBesides, Iโve errands to run.
โCatch ya later!โ
He turned and Nick transferred the bakery bag to his left hand and with his right, did a complicated handshake with Ares involving fist bumps, standard handshakes, thumb handshakes and shoulder taps.
And then she was alone with Nick.
At least she was fully dressed this time, but not sure whether to fold her hands in front of her groin, or fold her arms, or swing her arms or turn away.
โHeโs right,โ Nick said.
โAbout what?โ
โIt is a nice place, but not one where the beige version of you would be comfortable.โ
He went back into her little kitchen, put the pastries on a plate from the dish rack and started opening cupboards looking for another coffee cup, only there wasnโt one.
โYou have the cup, Iโll take the glass,โ she went to the table to fetch it.
โYou only have one cup?โ
โIโm not here much.โ
โWhy not?โ he asked, pouring the coffee.
She gestured around the room, โI work a lot, and this place is too small to have many people around, so I just meet up elsewhere.โ
โYour cocoon,โ he looked around the flat again, this time noting the singles; one small couch, with one cushion and throw rug, one table.
One screen, partly obscuring a bed that hadnโt been made yet.
And yet, it was comfortable, with art on the walls, and collections of shells, ceramics and tiny animal sculptures. And dammit he was right; it was her cocoon.
โDoesnโt take much to clean,โ she said brightly.
He turned back to her.
She carried the plate to the table, and he carried the drinks.
They looked at each other and subsided into the couch.
Which only had one bum print in its centre, and as he settled on the left, and her on the right, the stuffing shifted throwing them closer together.
He cleared his throat and adjusted his seating a little further away.
โAre these yours?โ he asked, gesturing at a couple of large landscapes sheโd been trying to figure out how to use as room dividers.
She nodded.
โYouโre very talented.โ He looked around again, โmay I look at your other sketchbooks?โ
โNo.โ
โModest?โ
โNot really, you can see there isnโt much room here so I have a storage unit,โ she lied.
Wilkinsonโs bought the sketchbooks, new ones for each investigation so of course, she gave them back when they filled up.
He offered her the plate; she picked up a pastry and took a bite.
โYouโre the first person Iโve given a book to, but now Iโve got the idea I might be able to sell them,โ which was technically correct.
He chose a pastry and took a bite.
It occurred to her that she wasnโt supposed to know anything about him, except that he was pretty enough to follow around for days trying to get a good picture.
And that she was getting a pay rise to find out more about him.
Which left her feeling uncomfortable, and a little dirty.
Even if he was a crime kingpin.
Clearly, she was not cut out for law enforcement.
โSo, you know I go around drawing total strangers, what is it you do for a living?โ
He laughed, โnothing as exciting as sketching strangers. I sell professional espresso coffee machines and supplies.โ
โIs it a good living?โ
โOf course! This is Melbourne, home of the worldโs best coffee culture after all.
โGetting the distribution agreements with the overseas manufacturers was the hardest part, but pretty much everyone in business here is looking to buy or lease them.
โItโs not just cafรฉs and restaurants, Iโve got high-end boutiques, barbers and car repair services signed up too. I even had a plastic surgeon sign up for one yesterday!โ
โA plastic surgeon? Thatโs a road too far for me, but sometimes it can take hours at the hairdresser and I reckon a decent coffee would help the wait.โ
He ran a sticky finger along a lock of her hair, โyou spend hours in a hairdresser to get this look?โ
โIt was for a wedding, okay?โ
He stuffed the pasty in his mouth and held his hands out looking for something to wipe them with.
She swallowed the rest of her coffee, leaving the glass in the kitchen, brought him back the dish towel.
When she thought about it, every place sheโd sketched him, sold coffee. It was a very good cover story.
The doorbell went, so she left him on the couch while she answered it.
โPackage for delivery,โ Ryan said, โplease sign here.โ
She stepped through to the corridor, and he quietly said, โitโs a combined bug and panic button; Iโve activated it for you. If you can speak, say โQuetzalcoatl,โ and weโll know youโre in trouble. Just press the head of the serpent to activate the alarm, and weโll come get you.โ
She nodded.
โDonโt worry, weโll be nearby.โ
She smiled a thin, straight smile.
โThanks very much,โ she called out as he left, and started unwrapping the parcel as she returned to the flat.
She shoved the wrapping in the pocket of her jeans, pinned the brooch to her right shoulder, and twisted her body back and forth, enjoying its sparkle in the changing light.
โThatโs pretty,โ Nick said, coming up behind her.
โI saw it online and paid full price before it could get away.โ
โIs that Quetzalcoatl?โ
She didnโt start, or pause, just said, โsure is,โ as she took his hand and walked back to the couch, settling in on his left where, hopefully, the bug would pick him up well.
โTell me more about your coffee business.โ
Nick smiled, as though it was a topic he couldnโt get enough of.
โWell, if I was selling you one, Iโd want to know how many cups youโd be making, what kinds of coffee, and how much effort to put into them.โ
โAnd want if I didnโt want to make any effort at all?โ
โThen Iโd get you the fully automatic push-button kind and have it plumbed into the main water pipe. Then youโd just have to fill up the milk powder and sugar when it ran out.โ
โWhat if I wanted to make โproperโ lattes for people?โ
โIf you were making coffees all day, then Iโd suggest a machine with a heat exchanger, or if you were really concerned about an exact temperature of coffee a multi-boiler.
โYou need something like 25 amps of power for the heat exchanger and up to 40 for a boiler.
โAnd a two-group head for about 20 kg of coffee a week, or three groups for up to 100 kg a week.
โYouโve got machines where you can program shots by weight, and others that auto-brew.
โPlus, Iโd recommend an automatic cleaning cycle and an overnight mode that powers down when you haven’t used it for a while.
โAnd letโs not forget the ergonomic stress of using it all, so you want to think about bench height, and comfortable handles, and antifatigue mats.โ
โOr coffee for twelve in one go?โ
โDrip filter style. The beauty of this kind is that you donโt need to plug it in the main water, just add fresh water.โ
It sounded plausible, but he hadnโt said anything she couldnโt have figured out by herself with an internet search.
And she didnโt have enough knowledge to ask him the right questions to trap him.
โWhat about Ares?โ
โI saved his life, and when he fell on hard times, I hired him; he drives me around, helps me move the stock, and does other bits and pieces.โ
She nodded, plausible.
โWhat about you? What kind of job do you have that gives you the time to follow me around for days?โ
โActually, Iโve fallen on hard times myself – Iโm between jobs. Taking a week off before looking for something else.โ
She hated lying, but how else was she supposed to explain it? It wasnโt the kind of thing โnormalโ people did.
They sat silently for a moment. Nick looked around again, and Susan was relieved she hadnโt room for anything much more than small, secondhand furniture. There wasnโt anything there to suggest a good job, just junk.
If he asked what kind of job, what should she say?
Or would he be worried she was going to ask him for a job?
He cleared his throat again. โSo, who was on the phone then?โ
โWhen?โ
โJust then, you said โI donโt have a choice, heโs right here at my door.โโ
And reminded her of the stakes again.
Nick Liang was supposed to be the kind of guy who would beat you up as soon as look at you.
She had to remember that, no matter how nice and, well, innocent he seemed.
โOh that,โ she manufactured a giggle, โI was just telling my friend about you. She was warning me to steer clear.โ
They smiled at each other for a moment.
Susan, forgetting for a moment she was drinking from a glass sheโd left in the kitchen, lunged for his coffee before he could do something worrying, like kiss her.
His phone rang, breaking the tension and bring some breathing space.
He glanced at it, and said, โsorry, I have to get this,โ before getting off the couch and walking out the door.
She snuck after him, trying to eavesdrop on the conversation.
โYes,โ he said, followed by grunting interspersed by periods when someone at the other end said something.
Difficult to read much into that, until he said, โIโll be there as soon as I can.โ
Fortunately, she had enough time to get into the kitchen and look like she was busy.
โIโm sorry,โ he said, โIโve got to go. Thereโs a thingโฆโ
โOh. Well. Okay then. Iโll see you sometime.โ
โCan, um, can I call you?โ
โWhat, oh yeah, I guess.โ
And then, blessedly, he was gone.
Presumably taking Ryan and whoever had replaced her on surveillance detail.
Leaving a space behind that was ridiculously big for someone whoโd barely been there an hour.
But having been that close to him, she didnโt think he the same air of lethality Aresio did.
The original team briefing hadnโt detailed much of the kind of information youโd think a person whoโd killed another person with his bare hands would accrue.
It was as if heโd suddenly appeared, with no gang affiliation or history to explain who he was and where heโd come from.
Heโd emerged fully formed out of nowhere. Without a supervillain origin story if you will.
She decided to do some digging on her own, and pulled her laptop out from its storage place under the couch, logging into her account at Wilkinsonโs and searching all the databases available to her; publicly and through Wilkinsonโs subscriptions.
Sometime later, sheโd come with back plenty over the last five years or so, and next to nothing previously.
Not high school records, not immigration records, not even a library card.
It would have done for the most cursory background check, but not for someone like her, or someone using the specialised skills at Wilkinsonโs.
For comparison, she searched Aresio, found a number of aliases, criminal activity dating back more than a decade, as well as school records.
She rang Mimma, who asked, โhow are you getting on with the target? Any issues I need to know about?โ
โFine, heโs left me to do something, but I expect Ryan is tailing him.
โBut somethingโs not right, and Iโm not sure I can explain it.โ
โWhat makes you say that?โ
Susan settled herself more comfortably on the couch, โwhat exactly do we know about our client, and what exactly do we know about Nick Liang?โ
โWe havenโt backgrounded the client, and our basic starting point is always that the client is honest with us. The fee for engagement generally ensures only serious queries.โ
โHas anyone authorised a full background search on Nick Liang to confirm the details weโve been given?โ
โI couldnโt say for sure, that wasnโt part of my briefing. Why?โ
โIโve done some basic background, and his history is quite short. On the other hand, his friend Aresio Vitale has a long history.โ
โWhat are you saying?โ Mimma was starting to sound annoyed.
โIโm wondering whether Nick Liang exists, or whether heโs an undercover operative sent by the AFP, or ASIO.
โPerhaps to investigate Aresio?โ
Mimma was silent, Susan could almost hear Mimmaโs brain moving.
Susan continued, โthe client may be suspicious of Nickโs credentials, and if heโs undercover, we may be putting his life in danger.โ
Susan waited another moment or two before Mimma sighed.
โLet me check with Ben. Iโll get back to you.โ
It was several days before she heard from Mimma, but in the meantime, sheโd watched the news break as the AFP busted an international drug ring in conjunction with Police in 16 other countries.
Theyโd seized more than 105 kg of drugs, 42 firearms, more than 9.5 million dollars in cash, plus luxury goods and cars in Victoria alone. As well as evidence of 19 murder plots in ongoing investigations.
Prominent footage included Aresio wearing handcuffs, escorted by Police, plus others with covers over their heads.
No sign or mention of Nick though.
And when she got her next pay, it included exactly 2.8 days of higher duties, most of which was gobbled up in the extra tax.
According to Mimma, Ben had contacted someone he knew in the intelligence community, and shared some information about the investigation. And that was about all she permitted to know.
Presumably, theyโd gotten him out.
ยซยซ โข ยปยป
Life continued pretty much as normal. She took her sketchbooks from Wilkinsonโs and dressed in her beige sundress as she continued to sketch her assigned targets.
As the weather cooled, she added a beige cardigan and sought warmer observation points than benches in the Bourke Street Mall.
She tried harder to blend into the crowds, but her heart wasnโt really in it.
And she kept seeing Nick everywhere. Though she was fairly sure that was her imagination.
Heโd given her a glimpse of an alternative future. Not so much the gangsterโs moll element, more the like-mindedโฆ Soul mate?
Gak.
She definitely needed a holiday somewhere sunny and frenzied, followed by a transfer to another department.
Someone took a seat next to her, but as the cafรฉ was filling up for the lunch crowd, she just shifted her chair enough to clear her view of the target.
โDid you forget me so soon?โ a voice asked?
She looked up to see Nick. Only also not Nick.
Heโd cut his hair, and dressed in jeans and a button-down shirt with the sleeves rolled up, looked less like a gangster and more like the Police officer sheโd supposed him to be.
โYou still owe me a drink,โ he said.
She didnโt know what to say, so she didnโt say anything.
He stood up and offered her his hand.
She looked past him to Ryan on the other side of the cafรฉ, and made a seemingly random coded gesture to let him know she was off.
Then looked back up at Nick, and said โfine.
โYou owe me an explanation.โ
โIf I didnโt owe you my life, Iโd be demanding an explanation.โ
She smiled, and took his hand, โletโs get a drink and you can tell me all about it.โ
THE END
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